Monday, 20 August 2018

The Elephant and The Monkey



Learning GoalI am learning to write a narrative text.
Success criteriaI can do this when I have
  •  a Title
  • Beginning: Who is the story about?
  • Middle: describe the problem and the solution
  • End: What happened at the end?
Once an elephant saw a monkey. The monkey said don't eat me. I may be able to help you one day.

One day the elephant's trunk got stuck on the branches of a tree. The monkey shook the branches and the elephant's trunk dropped down.

I am free, said the elephant. The monkey saved me.                                         
                                                    By Nicole
                                       

Monday, 7 May 2018

The Noisy Traffic


Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when We can use describing  words.
I can see the speeding cars roar along the road. The noisy trucks sound like a thundering noise as they rumble past.
                                                       B y Nicole

Monday, 26 March 2018

The Weather


Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can use describing  words.

It is very hot today. The fiery sun is very hot. The sun makes me sweaty. I drink  lots of water. The water cools me down. The sun makes me tired and sleepy.
                                                 By Nicole